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Posted June 1, 2021 at 12:00 am

I do love these exchanges between Eve and Lillian, they make me muahaha and huhu.

And I also appreciate the word bubbles here, how some of them squiggle around, and how they clearly indicate who speaks in what way, that's always a nice thing to get right! If it's your style, it can really get expressive and can let readers know a lot about the tone of your characters' voice. 

However I'm not loving the text being awkwardly separated there in panel 2 strip 1 and panel 1 strip 2. That was probably an unseen error on my part, probably changed a lot of text around for book 1 or something and didn't realize these weren't typed in correctly. Anyway, all that to say: woops!

And let's applause Evelyne's best quality here: making fast friends! Lillian is down to party and she can't get enough of Eve's gentle approach.


--> This is a rerun of the finished webcomic Go Get a Roomie! You can find these two strips in the old archive >here<!

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